Rough edit Feedback

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 Rough edit feedback:

Positives:

- Music is good at the start 
- Links to Silence of The Lambs 
- Incision part is good 
- Vignette/blur adds to creepiness


Improvements:

- Shots are a bit repetitive, with character being shown stitching continuously 
- Structuring the credits better — space, area, how they’re shown with the same shots and such 
- A bit repetitive with needle scenes, may need to cut them out and make them much shorter
- Needle weaving in and out parts are the most creepiest/eerie-like 
- Building up the climax — scissors can be the climax part in the tailor shop 
- Camera push-out/leaving from the character — to show their vulnerability 


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