Rough edit Feedback
Rough edit feedback: Positives : - Music is good at the start - Links to Silence of The Lambs - Incision part is good - Vignette/blur adds to creepiness Improvements : - Shots are a bit repetitive, with character being shown stitching continuously - Structuring the credits better — space, area, how they’re shown with the same shots and such - A bit repetitive with needle scenes, may need to cut them out and make them much shorter - Needle weaving in and out parts are the most creepiest/eerie-like - Building up the climax — scissors can be the climax part in the tailor shop - Camera push-out/leaving from the character — to show their vulnerability Verbal Feedback